Would you convey my compliments to the purist who reads your proofs and tell him or her that I write in a sort of broken-down patois which is something like the way a Swiss waiter talks, and that when I split an infinitive, God damn it, I split it so it will stay split, and when I interrupt the velvety smoothness of my more or less literate syntax with a few sudden words of bar-room vernacular, that is done with the eyes wide open and the mind relaxed but attentive.
Interpretation
The quote highlights the author's unapologetic approach to writing, embracing imperfections while being aware of style and expression.
Raymond Chandler reflects on his writing style, emphasizing a blend of formal and informal language that authentically represents his voice. He acknowledges his deliberate choices in writing, showcasing confidence in his individuality rather than adhering strictly to conventional grammar rules. This approach suggests that creativity often lives in the tension between rigid structure and spontaneous expression.
In practice
In a writing workshop, to encourage participants to embrace their unique styles.
Undoubtedly the stories about them [hard-boiled detectives] had a fantastic element. Such things happened, but not so rapidly, nor to so close-knit a group of people, nor within so narrow a frame of logic. This was inevitable because the demand was for constant action; if you stopped to think you were lost. When in doubt, have a man come through a door with a gun in his hand.
There was a desert wind blowing that night. It was one of those hot dry Santa Anas that come down through the mountain passes and curl your hair and make your nerves jump and your skin itch. On nights like that every booze party ends in a fight. Meek little wives feel the edge of the carving knife and study their husbands' necks. Anything can happen. You can even get a full glass of beer at a cocktail lounge.
Organized crime is the dirty side of the sharp dollar.
When in doubt, have a man come through the door with a gun in his hand.
The flood of print has turned reading into a process of gulping rather than savoring.
If my books had been any worse, I should not have been invited to Hollywood, and if they had been any better, I should not have come.
He that would fish, must venture his bait.
The reality of truth is not to be bought, to be sold, to be repeated; it cannot be caught in books. It has to be found from moment to moment, in the smile, in the tear, under the dead leaf, in the vagrant thought, in the fullness of love.
Everything that irritates us about others can lead us to an understanding of ourselves.
Little by little he came to recognize the difference between the spirits that agitated him, one from the enemy and one from God.
I became a better listener than I ever had been as a result of playing Jean Luc Picard because it was one of the things that he does terrifically well.
If I had more time, I would have written less.
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