Remember, it is no sign of weakness or defeat that your manuscript ends up in need of major surgery. This is a common occurrence in all writing, and among the best writers.
William Strunk, Jr.Read
Instead of announcing what you are about to tell is interesting, make it so.
Interpretation
Rather than claiming your message is interesting, let the content speak for itself through its quality.
This quote emphasizes the importance of substance over mere claims. It encourages individuals to present their ideas and information in a compelling manner, allowing the inherent interest of the content to shine through rather than relying on verbal assurances. The message suggests that people's attention is captured more effectively by the richness of the message itself than by its superficial presentation.
In practice
In a presentation, instead of stating 'this is a fascinating topic,' dive right into compelling stories or data.
Remember, it is no sign of weakness or defeat that your manuscript ends up in need of major surgery. This is a common occurrence in all writing, and among the best writers.
The surest way to arouse and hold the attention of the reader is by being specific, definitive, and concrete. The greatest writers - Homer, Dante, Shakespeare - are effective largely because they deal in particulars and report the details that matter. Their words call up pictures.
The approach to style is by way of plainness, simplicity, orderliness, sincerity.
Make definite assertions. Avoid tame, colorless, hesitating, non-committal language.
Avoid fancy words....If you admire fancy words, if every sky is beauteous, every blonde curvaceous, every intelligent child prodigious, if you are tickled by discombobulate, you will have bad time Reminder 14.
Rather, very, little, pretty - these are the leeches that infest the pond of prose, sucking the blood of words. The constant use of the adjective little (except to indicate size) is particularly debilitating; we should all try to do a little better, we should all be very watchful of this rule, for it is a rather important one, and we are pretty sure to violate it now and then.
Traveling makes men wiser, but less happy.
I sometimes find, and I am sure you know the feeling, that I simply have too many thoughts and memories crammed into my mind. βAt these times, I use the Pensieve. One simply siphons the excess thoughts from oneβs mind, pours them into the basin, and examines them at oneβs leisure. It becomes easier to spot patterns and links, you understand, when they are in this form.
It would be the height of absurdity to label ignorance tempered by humility "faith"! (Institutio III.2.3)
Here is a new spiritual practice for you: don't take your thoughts too seriously.
Ignorance is a virus. Once it starts spreading it can only be cured by reason. For the sake of humanity, we must be that cure.
Of a truth, Knowledge is power, but it is a power reined by scruple, having a conscience of what must be and what may be; whereas Ignorance is a blind giant who, let him but wax unbound, would make it a sport to seize the pillars that hold up the long-wrought fabric of human good, and turn all the places of joy as dark as a buried Babylon.
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